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Snacking on Sugary Bread

My sweet memory of simple moments

By Gabriela Trofin-TatárPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Snacking on Sugary Bread
Photo by Juan Carlos on Unsplash

Those were the times when nothing much was had.

Misty mornings in spring, hot flashes of summery bread,

Memories of a time when chocolate was luxurious,

When oranges, bananas, and salamy would put one into debt.

We had white refined sugar, the crunchy miraculous type,

We'd sprinkle it on half-dried bread

and off to the low rooftop we'd climb.

My cousin and I, under the flimsy shade of the cherry tree,

Snacking in our deliriously delicious simplicity,

What our grandmother's closet would provide.

Just that sweet intoxicating feeling of whiteness,

Dissolving, imbuing itself deeply into our childhood souls.

The bread was simple, white bought bread, from the corner shop,

The type everyone was grateful for and no one would dread.

Together, the sugar on top of the crumbly half-old slices,

Would seem like a pure treat, on a hot day in summer.

We are two kids dreaming on top of the low rooftop,

Watching the horizon with hope, making up stories of better days,

Adventures and confectionery trips we couldn't afford.

No money was akin to just being in the moment,

Playing with what nature had to offer,

At the edge of the cornfield, we would play hide and seek,

We'd climb the old apricot tree and get bitten by spiders,

But our souls and imagination were ours to keep.

Then back to our magical treacly sugary bread slice -

Because when we could get our snack, we would be grateful,

The feeling of being full in our stomachs would be enough.

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💗 Thank you for reading! I am grateful for this challenge and the deep memory it brought about this special sugary treat.

I appreciate your support.💗

You could also buy me a coffee or a tea and/or let me know your ideas in the comments section.

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About the Creator

Gabriela Trofin-Tatár

Full Stack Developer in the making and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/

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  • Nature Lover16 days ago

    oh, I love this so much! Misty mornings in spring, hot flashes of summery bread. It reminds me of my nanna.

  • Ameer Bibi21 days ago

    Wow you captured yummy memories. Beautiful

  • M.B Hesperia 21 days ago

    Lovely piece and relatable. Beautifully captured the moments.

  • Novel Allenabout a month ago

    I totally get the can't afford it vibe of long ago. We made do with what we had and enjoyed it best we could. Great memories of sweet bead,

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Ahhh, those were the days. This was so nostalgic and wonderful. Loved it!

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