Slip Sliding Away
Freezing Rain. It Ain't Funny
Falling on my ass
In pain, giggling like a fool
Singing Paul Simon
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Jacob looked down at his chest. His skin was firm, his muscles sinewy. There was only the faintest shadow of a mark where the plastic drain had once been. Not even a scar, only a mere discolouration. He stroked his fingers over the spot, then over his arms reassuring himself that he was here, that there could be no mistake; he was, without a doubt, alive.
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This was joy to read, nice work.
See A Glance If You Like Dream Poetry ππhttps://vocal.media/poets/dreams-a-journey-through-the-mind
You are just so talented! This is so funny and clever! Keep up the great work π Iβm a fan for life lol
I reread this today, I cannot believe how much you expressed with so few words. It is full of laughter and emotion. Brilliant
Ouch! Well done, my friend.
Hope your rear is okay π
Freezing rain is definitely no joke! Excellent poem, Cathy! π And congrats on the Top Story!
Beautiful, Cathy. Funny. π€£
Very nice... :)
Told you this was funny. Well done congrats
Love it! Simple and relatable
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L.O.L....ππ€£π engaging. Laughter, is good for the soul. Congrats!!!
Pure entertainment π
Congratulations on Top Story, Cathy!! πππ
LOL, love it! I've fallen on my ass many a time. Congrats on the top story.
I like it, straight to the point
Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Congratulations ππ
Lol this was great!!! Congratulations on the new top story!!
Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Congratulations on your Top Story β€οΈ
Love your humor, Cathy. π Paul Simon songs going through my head for three days now....πΌ
Slipping on the ice is one of my greatest fears. If it happens, hope I can accept it with as much humor!
Hahaha, not about your fall. I found the whole thing clever and amusing.