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Freezing Rain. It Ain't Funny

By Cathy holmesPublished 17 days ago β€’ 1 min read
Photo by Alvin Engler on Unsplash

Falling on my ass

In pain, giggling like a fool

Singing Paul Simon

nature poetry

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Linda Marry3 days ago

    This was joy to read, nice work.

  • Vivin Akshay8 days ago

    See A Glance If You Like Dream Poetry πŸ‘‰πŸ‘‰https://vocal.media/poets/dreams-a-journey-through-the-mind

  • Lori Melton9 days ago

    You are just so talented! This is so funny and clever! Keep up the great work 😊 I’m a fan for life lol

  • Jason Basaraba11 days ago

    I reread this today, I cannot believe how much you expressed with so few words. It is full of laughter and emotion. Brilliant

  • Allie Bickerton11 days ago

    Ouch! Well done, my friend.

  • Rachel Rose13 days ago

    Hope your rear is okay πŸ˜‚

  • Keila Aartila14 days ago

    Freezing rain is definitely no joke! Excellent poem, Cathy! 😁 And congrats on the Top Story!

  • Daniel Jeyaraman14 days ago

    Beautiful, Cathy. Funny. 🀣

  • Jason Basaraba14 days ago

    Told you this was funny. Well done congrats

  • Ash Taylor14 days ago

    Love it! Simple and relatable

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  • Sharon Bethea15 days ago

    L.O.L....πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚ engaging. Laughter, is good for the soul. Congrats!!!

  • Gina B.15 days ago

    Pure entertainment πŸ˜†

  • Gina C.15 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story, Cathy!! 😍😍😍

  • Misty Rae15 days ago

    LOL, love it! I've fallen on my ass many a time. Congrats on the top story.

  • Pryor Da costa15 days ago

    I like it, straight to the point

  • Heather Hubler15 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • Congratulations πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰

  • Lol this was great!!! Congratulations on the new top story!!

  • Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • Congratulations on your Top Story ❀️

  • PK Colleran15 days ago

    Love your humor, Cathy. 😍 Paul Simon songs going through my head for three days now....🎼

  • Slipping on the ice is one of my greatest fears. If it happens, hope I can accept it with as much humor!

  • Lamar Wiggins15 days ago

    Hahaha, not about your fall. I found the whole thing clever and amusing.

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