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Six of Swords

A Villanelle for the Comfort Challenge

By MorganaPublished 4 years ago • Updated 4 years ago • 1 min read
The Lady of Shallott, John William Waterhouse, 1888 (Public Domain)

Fear is a flood, a dam overflowing.

When muddy depths croak, "sink, swim or fly?"

Comfort is knowing that I will keep going.

~~~

Failure's most tarnished when winners are glowing,

Bereft perception steals worth from the try.

Fear is a flood, a dam overflowing.

~~~

Once marked a good path: a black raven crowing.

I learned then, bad omens are one way to lie—

Doubt's a false friend that keeps us from going.

~~~

Lives are uprooted by hurricane's blowing

(Wind sows hidden seeds of an old tree's demise),

Fear is a flood, a dam overflowing.

~~~

Now ice slicks the road, a mean cloud is snowing!

I excavate fire that frost always belies;

Comfort arrives alongside keeping-going.

~~~

A scalpel, a scar, rattle cough and red eyes.

For a moment I think, could it be worse to die?

New fears flood in—they're damn overflowing.

Comfort is knowing that I will keep going.

inspirational

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    Written by Morgana