Six of Swords
A Villanelle for the Comfort Challenge

Fear is a flood, a dam overflowing.
When muddy depths croak, "sink, swim or fly?"
Comfort is knowing that I will keep going.
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Failure's most tarnished when winners are glowing,
Bereft perception steals worth from the try.
Fear is a flood, a dam overflowing.
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Once marked a good path: a black raven crowing.
I learned then, bad omens are one way to lie—
Doubt's a false friend that keeps us from going.
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Lives are uprooted by hurricane's blowing
(Wind sows hidden seeds of an old tree's demise),
Fear is a flood, a dam overflowing.
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Now ice slicks the road, a mean cloud is snowing!
I excavate fire that frost always belies;
Comfort arrives alongside keeping-going.
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A scalpel, a scar, rattle cough and red eyes.
For a moment I think, could it be worse to die?
New fears flood in—they're damn overflowing.
Comfort is knowing that I will keep going.
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