You are the noise
She & I created together.
You are the missed heartbeat
When she said yes,
And the disbelief
After she said I’m leaving.
*
You are the tear left unshed
A sanctuary for my sorrow
You are the space where there’s always a seat
You are the music along which my songs flow.
*
You are the temple for our incomplete story
You are where I go to feel.
Foe and friend,
You counsel me whenever I lose my words
And haunt me when she loses hers.
*
You are scales I can never balance
You bring gifts of ideas
You hold answers
And you withhold them.
*
So I run to you
and from you
Yet always I land on your doorstep
Humble, wretched, or overjoyed.
*
You creep up amidst noise
And yet roar louder
in quiet.
Silence, you are the home she and I shared,
Silence—the chasm between us.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Thank you for reading and please share if you know of anyone who might appreciate my work. Other entries for the challenge ‘After the Parade’ are:
or you might like this runner-up in the ‘From Across the Room’ challenge:
About the Creator
Teresa Renton
Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (8)
Ah I have been here before, my last comment stands true
Wonderful words
nice images, very nice
Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
Very nice
Beautiful❤️
This was so brilliant! Very beautifully written!
Love this, Teresa. It is elegant in both form and story.