Shadow
For Those Suffering with Depression, Addiction, or Suicidal Thoughts
You used to be the life of the party.
You used to be the light of my days.
You used to be everything to me,
But “used to be’s” a sorry phrase.
I ache to have the old you with me.
I want to give you hugs every night.
But how can I find you, my dear friend,
When you seem to have lost your light?
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You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, nothing but a shadow on the wall.
You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, there’s no “u” in us at all.
Something is darker about you. Somehow, you’ve gone away.
I know that you are fighting for a way to smother the gray. But...
You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, nothing but a shadow on the wall.
You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, there’s no “u” in us at all.
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I want your laugh. I want your smile. I want your love. It’s been a while.
I’ll be your strength. I’m here for you. Just lean on me. We’ll see it through.
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I’m begging you to get the help you need.
I don’t know what I can do.
Please, don’t you give up on yourself.
I won’t ever give up on you.
I can see what you are going through.
You don't deserve such distress.
But it’s time to face this thing head-on.
I can see that you’re a mess.
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You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, nothing but a shadow on the wall.
You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, there’s no “u” in us at all.
Something is darker about you. Somehow, you’ve gone away.
I know that you are fighting for a way to smother the gray. But...
You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, nothing but a shadow on the wall.
You’re a shadow, sha-sha-sha-shadow, there’s no “u” in us at all.
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Thank you for reading this poem, which is a musical work. If you or someone you love is suffering, please seek help. No one wants you to be a shadow of your former self.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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truly beautiful Julie. Well done