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SERENE

Peaceful

By Babs IversonPublished 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
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SERENE
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Loose

Clothes

Lounging

Relaxing

Seated in armchairs

Music wafts while the fireplace warms us.

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Hot

Food

Healthy

Comforting

We dine together

Splitting a simply splendid meal.

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Safe

Home

Secure

Grateful for

Our warm cozy shelter

Protects us from the outside world.

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Bath

Hour

Soaking

Epsom salts

Scented candles lit

Nightly meditating, refreshed.

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Laugh

With

Friends and

Family

An untroubled trip

Or holiday get-together.

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Step

Walk

Nature

See the trees

Watching the wildlife

A convenient break from routine.

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A

Book

Novel

Humorous

Propped up in bed

Reading until it's time to sleep.

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Pets

Dogs

The cats

Animals

Giving happy vibes

Cheerfully, soft cuddle greetings.

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Writer's Notes: The above poem was written for the Get Comfortable Challenge. The format sequence for this Fibonacci poem is 1-1-2-3-5-8. The six-line poem has a total of twenty syllables. The numbers equal the syllables in each line. There are eight separate poems or can be read as one whole poem.

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    I love Fibonacci I used that in my stories! A beautiful theory of math. I appreciate this so much in your prose!!! Great job πŸ‘

  • sleepy draftsabout a year ago

    Absolutely wonderful! πŸ’—

  • Sissi Smith2 years ago

    I have never heard of Fibonacci. How cool! I love rhythm play so I'll definitely have to look more into this. Thank you for sharing!

  • Lovely Fibonacci! poem

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Relatable,Awesome πŸ‘

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    So many great poems.

  • Yayyy another Fibonacci! You nailed this one! Loved them all!

  • Caroline Jane2 years ago

    Clever wordsmithing πŸ™Œ

  • What a fantastic challenge piece and you’ve nailed this format my friend.

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Lovely , enjoyed it so β™₯️🌹🫢🏽

  • Linda Rivenbark2 years ago

    This poem is fantastic! I love the Fibonacci pattern for poetry. It seems to fit the relaxed, laid-back atmosphere you are creating here. It makes me think about how these simple pleasures that we take for granted are really so much to be thankful for. Well done!

  • Absolutely brilliant! You had to know I was counting while reading and you nailed it, spot on! Well done.

  • C. H. Richard2 years ago

    All words mentioned gave me comfort ❀️

  • NiceπŸ’•

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is wonderful. Well done.

  • Ashley Shiflett2 years ago

    I love this!

  • Lovely. I really enjoyed this

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