See Saw
An Undisciplined Poem About Me
These are just some lines about the way I am, there are some rhymes and near rhymes but that is about the closest it comes to real poetry, but I do hope you like it. I have often said I feel lazy when I write a poem, but then find it takes longer than writing fiction, although most of these words came when I was out on one of my works.
The Music Is See-Saw by Pink Floyd
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I Am A See-Saw
One Day I'm Up
One Day I'm Down
One Day A Smile
One Day A Frown
One Day I'll Leave
Then I'll Stick Around
But I'm Always In Love
With The Friends That I've Found
I'm Just A See-Saw
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I love poems that mix humanness with whimsy. Awesome!
Love it! I think weβre all a bit see-saw-ie π₯°
I love the see-saw idea! This is so sweet and real :)
This is so cool. Love it.
Nice... Very simple and to the point...
Awwww, this was so lovely! I love how you described the emotions using the ups and downs of a see saw!