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See Saw

An Undisciplined Poem About Me

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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These are just some lines about the way I am, there are some rhymes and near rhymes but that is about the closest it comes to real poetry, but I do hope you like it. I have often said I feel lazy when I write a poem, but then find it takes longer than writing fiction, although most of these words came when I was out on one of my works.

The Music Is See-Saw by Pink Floyd

πŸ’™πŸŽ πŸ§ΈπŸŽ πŸ’™

I Am A See-Saw

One Day I'm Up

One Day I'm Down

One Day A Smile

One Day A Frown

One Day I'll Leave

Then I'll Stick Around

But I'm Always In Love

With The Friends That I've Found

I'm Just A See-Saw

πŸ’™πŸŽ πŸ§ΈπŸŽ πŸ’™

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

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Babs β™₯ Mariann β™₯ Dhar β™₯ Cathy β™₯ Judey β™₯

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)9 months ago

    Great Descriptionβ€οΈπŸ’―β—

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    I love poems that mix humanness with whimsy. Awesome!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Love it! I think we’re all a bit see-saw-ie πŸ₯°

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    I love the see-saw idea! This is so sweet and real :)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is so cool. Love it.

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Nice... Very simple and to the point...

  • Awwww, this was so lovely! I love how you described the emotions using the ups and downs of a see saw!

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