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scratches in my mind - per sempre

Another thought-provoking, inspirational senryu

By Paul StewartPublished about a month ago 1 min read
scratches in my mind - per sempre
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release the pressure

rename forever "until"

our future remains


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Author's Notes: I am having an interesting time writing these senryu that make up the unexpected and unplanned "scratches in my mind" series. Perhaps there is a chapbook in the making. We shall see. Anyway...hope you are enjoying it.

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Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!


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Comments (7)

  • Grz Colm24 days ago

    Another great and thoughtful Senryu!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Oooh! Like this one a lot! Like the use of “replace, rename, remains” made it quite lyrical

  • Beautiful and thoughtful

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    You've gotten me thinking, Paul.

  • John Coxabout a month ago

    Never really noticed how threatening the word ‘until’ is until now.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Now that's a wise way to go about it. Loved your Senryu!🍩🥐

  • Some thought provoking words

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