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Saturn is cold

Living Alone in Saturn

By Karun Published 22 days ago 1 min read
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My brightness is dark

Waiting for spark

Eyes still bold

Sightless blind

Saturn is cold

Moon is too old

Love catches fire

Life is still left burning

Candle shutdowns in the morning

Saturn haunts you drowning

Wish I'm dreaming

Her eyes were fading in the sky

My dear girl, I see your lids open

Saturn is still hiding there

I'm locked in your stare

Your love, I'm Aware

Let us stay together

In the Saturn eyes

And your beauty lies

Following your eyesight

I will drag you my side

Shadows sink aside

Poignant winks beside

I'm frozen In your eyes

Except for the girl, my lies

Tears die

Years fly

Still, My brightness is dark

Saturn is cold, leaving behind my Mark

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About the Creator

Karun

🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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