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Sand

For Paul's "Most Favourite and Least Favourite Words Poetry Challenge"

By Matthew FrommPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
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Sand
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Sand

I hear some people hate it

It’s coarse

It’s rough

It gets everywhere

In between your toes,

And in your sheets

Gritty

Pervasive

I get it, but

I don’t mind it

A remnant of an adventure

Of a story perhaps untold

Even if it's a sad story

I’d rather see it unfold

Even if I should try

I could never despise

Something that brings to others

A possible sense of joy

No,

If there is a collection of letters

I am to despise

It is failure

And its dreadful deride

Even its cadence sings

A horrid minor key

“A lack of success”

Who decreed this?

I took a hundred classes

Passed a thousand tests

But the one I failed

Taught me more than the rest

So let’s stop painting failure

As a land of boiled bones

To be avoided and shunned

And embrace it as

The greatest teacher of all

Ohh,

And Paul

I almost forgot

Since you asked nicely,

I’ll offer up

without comment, mind,

That my favorite word

Is Snollygoster

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Written for Paul's "Most Favourite and Least Favourite Words Poetry Challenge"

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Matthew Fromm

Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of random knowledge. The best way to find your perfect story is to make it yourself.

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  • Patrick M. Ohana20 days ago

    There are several words I hate the most, but ma favourite word is pussy : )

  • Poppy 4 months ago

    I LOVED THE STAR WARS REFERENCE!! The whole poem was fantastic and the ending was great!

  • Kristen Balyeat4 months ago

    Beautiful poem, Matthew! Snollygoster is a new one for me. Off to look it up now!

  • Lamar Wiggins4 months ago

    Nice free form, and I agree with you about failure. For some reason, Snollygoster reminds me of gobstoppers or something Willy Wonka would call someone lol.

  • Very clever... I love the beach, so sand gets my tick of approval. 'Snollygoster' entered our home for the first time!

  • Mackenzie Davis4 months ago

    Ooh, love this! Snollygoster is indeed a beautiful word for a not so beautiful person. My favorite kind of word-collection. ;D I really like your take on the words. More the manifestation of the word that you like or hate, rather than the word itself or how it sounds/looks.

  • Daphsam4 months ago

    Well done, I have no idea what Snollygoster means but you did a great job with writing this.

  • L.C. Schäfer4 months ago

    I don't know what SNOLLYGOSTER means, but I love it already! Thank you for adding it to my life 😁

  • Kenny Penn4 months ago

    Great poem Matthew! I only hate sand when it’s hot as hell outside, but failure?! Yeah i usually hate that, unless it’s teaching me something.

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    This is beautiful. And I absolutely LOVE snollygoster. lol. What a great word.

  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    Snollygoster hahahahahahaha. Thank you for teaching me a new word. Love it and this poem was stunning, my friend. Failure is a bad word, but one we can learn from, sand is cool though, and I love the Star Wars references (of course) lol. Thank you for entering and offering up this mighty fine work for my little challenge! :) Adding it to the post now!

  • Oooo, snollygoster! I learned a new word today! Also, land of boiled bones, I really loved that. Your poem was awesome!

  • JBaz5 months ago

    Nice....My son hates the sand and dwe live on the west coast. I like you word

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Spectacular sand poem!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Celia in Underland5 months ago

    Such interesting choices. Love 'Snollygoster' sums up so much, so aptly. Failure is such a funny one. If you learn from it can it ever be as it says on the tin? Really well done 🤍

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Let me start off by taking my turn at being "that guy" and saying, check the definitions of "course" and "coarse." Other than that, I think "failure" is too important a word to despise. You said it yourself in this, it's how the word is interpreted and acted upon, no? A great entry for Paul's challenge, regardless!

  • Hannah Moore5 months ago

    I love this, the generosity holds through both the sand and the failure, so what I take away is something vivacious.

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