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SANCTUARY

Serenity

By Babs IversonPublished 4 years ago • Updated 4 years ago • 1 min read
SANCTUARY
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Shelter

calm, inviting

resting, recharging, refreshing

shower, towel, bedroom, bed

comforting, loving, sleeping

untroubled, joyful

sanctuary.

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Floor

clean, durable

walking, jumping dancing

walls, doors, hallways, rooms

covering, shielding, protecting

lofty, vaulted

ceiling.

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House

quiet, comfortable

living, sheltering, protecting

kitchen, heart, soul, abode

cooking, baking, eating

warm, cozy

home.

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Outside

stormy, stressful

walking, running, slipping

room, fireplace, furniture, music

playing, relaxing, resting

soft, snug

inside.

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Writer's notes: SANCTUARY, Serenity is submitted to the Get Comfortable Challenge. The comfort of the home is described in four Diamante poems. Alternating between a Synonym Diamante poem and an Antonym Diamante poem.

What is a Diamante poem? Is a style of poetry consisting of seven lines. The lines form a diamond shape. The first and seventh lines have one word. While in the Synonym Diamante poem the first line word and seventh line word are the same or similar, in the Antonym Diamante poem the words first line word and the seventh line word are opposites.

Did you notice that lines one four, and seven are all nouns? In lines, two and six two adjectives are used with three verbs used in lines three and five.

A special shout-out to Denise Lindquist for sharing and introducing me to the poetry style.

Thank you for reading! You are appreciated!

P.S. In quick edit, the lines form the diamond shape, and saved the lines are alligned to the left edge.

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Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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    Written by Babs Iverson