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Sagrada Familia

A love note to a favourite place

By JanePublished 12 days ago 1 min read
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Image by Patrice Audet from Pixabay

The snail on the door

From upside-down string

You grew a magnificence of stone and spire

Reaching from, and to, nature

But never exceeding in either direction

Yet, a snail on the door

In twisting turns

You reinvented the oleander

And, from names of the saints,

Built an enormous forest in the sky

Still, there was time for the snail

Simple pieces of glass

Bounce light into every season

Shining a perfect spring

Even into the heart of a winter morning

But you remembered the snail

Oh, to think your thoughts

As you carved bauxite from limestone

And immortalised a snail in wrought iron

Even as you conquered the sky

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  • Manisha Dhalani11 days ago

    Wow, such a lovely ode to your favourite place

  • Kamal O. Touhami11 days ago

    wonderful work of art.

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