Attending a film should be delightful
Because a ribbon of dreams unfurls there
Causing the trivial cares of the day
Dramatically to fade and dissolve
Egress from the routine doldrums of life
Found in the theater’s coughing darkness
Gives one a fresh story to read and love
However, it is clear that you have found
Instead of escape and relief, new pain
Just your downcast eyes sadly confirm this
Know that whatever has spoiled this reprieve
Loses its power to distract and harm
Mid the myriad shadows that dance here
Never allow petty cares to pollute
Our secular temple of spectacle
Put all of these grim miseries aside
Quest instead for a better world onscreen
Removed from mundane rules and ugly truths
Seek solace in fantasies brought to life
Tears will dry when your eyes watch phantoms move
Understand that I wish only to save
Viewers from invisible distraction
When you enter the cinema, do so
X-ray your woes: they are no more real than images
You will find displayed on the screen for your pleasure
Zones must remain discrete, and this one is for fun
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Well done!
Worse is when audience is on a phone at live theatre. Sigh. Nice work.
I love the atmosphere created in the above painting. I love the cinema ..I just wish there were more good films released, but I guess their is a decent back catalogue to work through slowly. I also sometimes enjoy seeing old movies on the big screen, but I’ll virtually watch anything. Loved the sentiments here and approach. I want this painting and poem on my wall now. My address is..!
"However, it is clear that you have found Instead of escape and relief, new pain Just your downcast eyes sadly confirm this" These lines were my favourite and resonated so deeply with me. Loved your Abecedarian!
I don't think this cinema shows anything too gritty.
Nicely crafted! Brilliant!
Mixing things up with a abecedarian, eh? What a picture! So vibrant but sad and still really despite the colour and your poem captures that well.
This one is for fun! And fun it is.