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Runners

Taking inspiration from "The Charge of the Light Brigade", a poem that experiments with rhythm and form and is far from the glory invoked by Tennyson's

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Runners
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Pounding feet across the fields,

Heartbeat's tension's big reveal,

In pursuit of our nightly meal,

Match our quarry pace for pace!

They're running!

We must chase!

*

Fearful scent pervades the air

Barbs of wire catching hair

Snagging ragged underwear,

Match our quarry pace for pace!

They're running!

We must chase!

*

Over hill and down in dale,

Pursuing them, the weary pale:

Whooping at their frightened wail!

Match our quarry pace for pace!

They're running!

We must chase!

*

Gradual weakening starts to show

Plodding, stumbling, getting slow

No time 'til we bring them low...

Match our quarry pace for pace!

They're flagging!

We must chase!

*

Panting, breaths are coming fast

Harder, harder, we must last

Before we taste our dark repast.

Match our quarry pace for pace!

They're failing!

We must chase!

*

Drooling, snarling, getting close,

Their fright assaults the eager nose.

Soon, they'll lie in Death's repose.

Matching our quarry pace for pace.

They're failing!

End the chase.

*

Sumptuous flesh pricked by fang

Air filled with metallic tang

Nothing like the taste of man.

We've caught our quarry, now outpaced.

They failed. We won.

Hunt complete.

*

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    Written by Rachel Deeming