rich kid, poor kid
tell me again about the ‘choices’ that people make?
money governs the poor house
as the emotional puppeteer
dialling the atmospheric climate
to the frequency of fear
.
“we can’t afford it” douses dreams
four metal clips on angels wings
before they even learn to fly
they are attuned only to how to survive
.
their dreams are placed in a box
filled with shells and collected rocks
and buried deep into the earth
alongside hope and fragments of self worth
.
it’s deeply embedded at such tender age
that some children are loved whilst others dispensed rage
the poor kid knew which one she was
and her heart eventually accepted that she was the cause
.
something inside her must be bad
for her parents not to love her or care when she’s sad
hence she grew up in burning shame
knowing deep down that she was to blame
.
only she never really understood why
she would be threatened with smacks if she dared to cry
she watched the other kids actually being bad
being mean and violent and not making parents mad
.
she was never once like that
so how to make sense of the fact
that she was punished and born into strife
and being good didn’t actually have influence on life?
.
so she tried her very best
to pass the ever-changing, invisible test
by keeping herself silent and out of sight
making whispered wishes to the stars at night
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money in the rich house
is one of many tools in the shed
for the emotional climate
can be set consciously instead
.
opportunities endlessly bestowed
fun experiences frequently unfold
wished granted readily
and hearts radiate steadily
.
the rich kid gets to follow his dreams
for his parents have the means
they aren’t victims, angry and bitter
these are humans financially fitter
.
no one is scared about buying food
or receiving a bill that plummets the mood
they laugh over nourishing meals instead
and fall to sleep in comfortable beds
.
the rich kid always believes in his self worth
it’s never been in question since his arrival on earth
he never really stops to question why
he has this privilege whilst others just get by
.
there’s just this assumption that his family is better
they are deserving and so live unfettered
nothing like those animals below
who curse and yell and lack ethereal glow
.
but perhaps he too feels something is missing
in spite of his parents granting his wishing
perhaps his house is also devoid of magic
something taught to him as being man’s lowly trick
.
perhaps he doesn’t look at the stars at night
perhaps he never learns to appreciate that sight
perhaps his privilege obscures his view
of what in this world is real and true
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Comments (10)
Wonderfully written!!! I am writing very interesting stories come and read
You’ve done it again, Kayleigh. Goodness this was good. I know a few people who just don’t understand the differences you express so eloquently here.
But if you ask me, it's better to be rich rather than poor. I mean, in today's world, money is everything. But yet the rich feel there's a void. As the poor kid (still am, lol), that makes so angry. Like, what more do the rich want? Maybe I feel like this because I've been on survival mode since I was a kid. I don't know. But yeah, your poem perfectly portrays both POV of the poor kid and the rich kid! You nailed this!
Omg Kayleigh, this is so so powerful. I love that you wrote about this topic, it needs to be addressed more. This part really hit me: ‘ “we can’t afford it” douses dreams four metal clips on angels wings before they even learn to fly’ Wow, thank you for writing this!
Brought tears to my eyes. Very thought-provoking about the perspective of the rich and poor. This line "perhaps his house is also devoid of magic" just hit me so hard. Made me reminisce about when I used to think being rich would solve all my problems until I connected with rich people and saw they had the same problems and other things as well.
This poem was so good. It just kept flowing nicely from one line to the next. The contrast between the two worlds was so well articulated she vivid. I can't claim that I read all your poetry, but from what I read so far, I think this one is my favourite. The story was just told so well and flowed so smoothly
just... yeah...this is brilliance in written poetic, social commentry form!
This is really well done, Kayleigh. So many phrases stuck out to me as heavy but this one especially “…Fragments of self worth” 😞😞
You got me from the first stanza. Very powerful and effective.
Wonderfully written!!! Eloquently stated!!! Loving it!!!