Ribbons In The Sky After-Dark...
~Across The Room Challenge~
At the right time…
the Creator brought…
our souls together…
Pure infatuation serving…
as our serendipitous tether…
~
When our four eyes did meet…
Our souls joyously danced…
to an NSYNC beat…
~
From first sight…
we knew…
we would be dance partners for life…
since we got along just right…
& our mutual attraction
for each other…
immediately shone bright…
~
Therefore…
there would be…
NO 'BYE BYE BYES'…
nor…
Dear John or Dear Tiffany letters…
in sight that night…
~
Only chocolate-coated kisses…
Romantic walks in the park…
& 'Ribbons In The Sky' after-dark…
~
An affectionate pair that…
instantly cultivated…
the type of love connection…
that never made Stevie Wonder…
~
A duo that developed…
a special bond…
that outside forces…
could never put asunder...
~
Perfect complements...
like Peanut Butter and Jelly…
Right for each other…
Like a remote with the telly…
~
Our first night out…
our uncommon chemistry…
exploded through the roof…
So Chile'...
you know it was beyond time…
to sit down and grab…
a restaurant booth…
~
Time stopped as we conversed the night away…
Our impassioned hearts...
ceremoniously cementing…
our extraordinary bond that day…
About the Creator
Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Comments (3)
Previously read and hearted. I love the story this poem tells.
Wonderful poem. The Stevie Wonder references are a plus for me.
So Sweet, the feeling of a love encounter. Love the Peanut butter and Jelly line ♥️🌹