Revisited
Unwanted Guests
Whenever it wants
the past can tear down my doors
Continually haunts
stirring the dust on the floor
Trying to reclaim the power it held
reasserting presumptions, re-ringing those bells
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I tell it to get lost
but it clings tightly to my bones
Makes me exhausted
dispersing its clones
Just when I think I've got it under control
another pops up suffocating my soul
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Can you help me Mr. Clean
please bring with you some Bounty
I need that quicker picker upper
to come set me free
I've tried to ignore it
hoping it'll just go away
But it's as stubborn as shit
I need it to amscray!
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So, if there's a home remedy
to combat the past
Please send it to me
whatever way, make it fast
UPS or Fedex
doesn't matter at all
Show me your flex
making it go AWOL
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (2)
Ever wonder who the model was for Mr. Clean? Nah, neither have I. But if you get an answer, please forward it to me.
I felt this to my very core halfway into the first verse. So very well done, it grabbed me and offered a modicum of consolation. We are not the only ones!