If the sun burned as bright as you
If the stars were as soothing
If berries tasted as sweet
But it’s always you I’m choosing
A fools cause is noble
For they aspire to make a goddess laugh
The pain of many hearts is weighing
A beautiful heart should be nurtured
The gentlest breeze
Or the sway of the tides
The petals bloom bright
Or the sun burns away the night
None of that compares
To your gentle curls
Or the sway of your hips
The sparkle in your eyes so bright
Or your warm laugh that brings me to tears
About the Creator
Hufflecup
I want nothing more than to dedicate my life to writing, so I figured I would start here to test the waters. I will be submitting stories to as many communities as possible.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
The Longest Minute
A minute. Sixty seconds to say goodbye. That’s all the time that I had left with him as the needle slid into his leg. I stared into his drooping eyes, looked at the blood-tainted saliva dripping from the corner of his mouth. They said that this was the best thing that we could do for him, a last kind act for a best friend…but if that were the case, then why did my heart feel so heavy?
By Stephanie Hoogstad5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (1)
I hope your are smiling as bright as this sun you portray Hufflecup!