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When we used to go …
And you always… and I …
Those were the best of times!
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About the Creator
Lea Waske
I left Vocal last spring to publish "Where the Bush Planes Flew", a memoir & history of a remote northern Ontario FN with Indigenous artist, Saul J. Williams.& "A Yuletide Adventure",3rd in my children's series. (Both on Amazon)
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Comments (3)
This was so wonderful!
Oh this was wonderful! I agree that placing the ellipsis in certain spots made this so much more personal. Really great work!
This one is so relatable! Excellent job on leaving the sentences half-finished so that the reader fills in the blanks with their own memories. I thoroughly enjoyed this haiku!