"Who are you?" said Blue to Red
"Red" said Red to Blue
"How do you do?" said Blue to Red
"Happy but fierce, how about you?" said Red to Blue
"I'm sad and Blue, can I sit with you?" Blue asked Red
"Sure" said Red to Blue with a warm smile
"I don't know what to do" said Blue, looking at Red
"That's okay" said Red to Blue
"Sometimes the best thing to do
Is nothing at all, that's what I do
When I am feeling as blue as you
We can sit, we can talk or say nothing at all" said Red to Blue
"There are days when I feel so mighty and tall
But today, I feel so worthless and small" sighed Blue, feeling the warmth from Red
"That's okay" said Red to Blue.
"We all feel like that sometimes.
Do you want to know a secret?
What I do when I feel like you?"
Blue pricked his ears and looked up eagerly into her warm pools of red
"Please Red, anything to help the dark thoughts in my head"
"Well. I try to remember, the good I've done
I've made mistakes, there are many stupid things I've done
Thoughtless, unkind and even cruel things
The memories of those are like mental stings
Instead of focusing on the bad, I focus on the good
So, If you want my advice dear Blue, look for the good"
"I am not sure I have any good in me, though" said Blue to Red, with a heavy sigh
"Nonsense. Everyone has good in them somewhere
you need to look for it" said Red to Blue
"Okay" said Blue to Red
"I love my blue skin" offered Blue to Red
"Good start" said Red to Blue
"I care" said Blue to Red
"You do and that is important" said Red to Blue
"Remember and keep note of the good in you" said Red to Blue
*
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (7)
Red is blue and blue is red, we just have to get them straight within our heads. Ha, I rhymed too. Loved it.
I really liked this poem about two of my favourite colours… such an encouraging ending with wise advice for us all. Thanks!
I love this! I don't know how you thought of such a unique idea to personify colours but it worked brilliantly! I pictured red as fire and blue as water, where red is usually considered violent but can bring warmth and comfort, and blue is considered soothing but secretly has a destructive streak she feels guilty about. That's probably a weird take on it but it just sprung vividly to mind. I love Blue saying 'I care'. I felt the weight in those words because them in themselves, despite being a good thing, can indeed make anyone feel blue.
Brilliant & beautiful!!!
So simple, yet so profound. Well done.
Too clever
I loved this so much! Such a simple story that speaks volumes. Fantastic :)