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A Poem in Pantoum Form
Wool-lined slippers warm my feet
Grandpa’s old cardigan gives me a hug
Flames in the fireplace cast comforting heat
The scent of Irish coffee wafts from my mug
Grandpa’s old cardigan gives me a hug
Grandma’s hand-knitted blanket rests on my lap
The scent of Irish coffee wafts from my mug
Classical music lulls me toward an afternoon nap
Grandma’s hand-knitted blanket rests on my lap
A leather-bound mystery keeps me from sleep
Classical music lulls me toward an afternoon nap
I snuggle into couch cushions, soft and deep
A leather-bound mystery keeps me from sleep
Wool-lined slippers warm my feet
I snuggle into couch cushions, soft and deep
Flames in the fireplace cast comforting heat
About the Creator
Staci Troilo
Staci's love for writing is only surpassed by her love for family and friends, and that relationship-centric focus is featured in her work, regardless of the genre she's currently immersed in. https://stacitroilo.com
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Whispering Woods Challenge Winners
Congratulations to Morgan Christy Rickards for their winning Whispering Woods story, Guardian at the Gate. Morgan has been a Vocal creator since February 2021, and this is their first time placing in Challenge — well done, starting with a win! Guardian at the Gate draws evocatively from Welsh tales of the Cantre'r Gwaelod, a lost sunken kingdom between the forest and the sea. Heledd’s dangerous adventure pulls her towards the water but her spirit is anchored in the woods: Morgan’s writing is atmospheric and exciting.
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A warm reminder of the coming fall/winter seasons. A beautiful piece of poetry, Staci.
Make me look forward to the holidays. Excellent feelings, Staci
This makes me feel all cozy and wishing for a cool autumn day to sit by the fire.
A fantastic poem. I love the form—and the wonderful feelings it conjures!
This makes me wish for fireplace weather. The imagery and words are comforting.
Incredible poem and I love the form! 🤗
I love this SO much, Staci. What a wonderful form of poetry. I love the repetition, the comfort, and the contrasts. Just beautiful!
I can feel the comfort! Wonderful imagery, Staci 💕🙂
This makes me want to curl up and read a good book with a nice hot cup of coffee.