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A bit of Alliterative Fall Fun

By Dana CrandellPublished 3 days ago • Updated 3 days ago • 1 min read
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Photo by Sergiy Tsyganenko on Unsplash

Pummeled pollen pods

Manufacture microscopic minions

Proliferating prodigiously

Blown by blustering breezes

Repeatedly riding respiration

Swiftly saturating sinus

Layering laboring lungs

Itchy irritation imbues

Massive mucus manufacturing

Creating chaotic coughing

Strong spontaneous sneezing

Suffocation stifling sleep

Disposition deteriorates dangerously


This fun little rant stemmed from a phone conversation with my sister about the ragweed problem in my town this year. I said something about "pulverised pollen pods" and she suggested I use the alliterative phrase in a poem. I modified it a bit, and here's the result! Thanks, Sis!

If you're not familiar with ragweed and its pollen, each tiny pod you can see in the picture above is made up of multiple, tiny balls of pollen, each of which is covered with tiny spikes.

Rain, which you would think would help keep the stuff from going airborne, actually dislodges the particles faster, and they distribute quickly as things dry out again.

Ragweed allergies are a serious problem this time of year for many people, including, as you may have guessed, me.

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Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

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    Written by Dana Crandell