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Give Me Five

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Pic by RootOfAllLight (CC BY-SA 4.0) via Wikimedia Commons

Air

Oxygen’s the one

to aspire to always have

breathed in all the time.

A part of the air

it seems to lack in despair

hold on for dear life.

Earth

From within you I

transcend to return older

but never ready.

As I dined on thee

they will dine on me heedless

of who I once was.

Fire

As I gaze upon

you dear Sun I realise

I’ll always love thee.

As you burn for good

you also burn for bad any

living or lifeless.

Water

I drink thee with love

my body rejoices at

your endless power.

I bathe within your

glory to appear in three

states; I love them all.

Spirit

Are you in the air

dead in the earth, alive in

fire and in water?

My body dislikes

your impudence when you think

you are everything.

inspirational
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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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