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Quantum Entanglement

A Love Poem by Keila Aartila

By KJ AartilaPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Quantum Entanglement
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Our souls entangled from across the room,

never to be undone by common sense.

We never even touched, we barely spoke.

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Even before I saw, I knew a presence

I could not deny, a force so intense -

our souls entangled from across the room.

*********************************

A glorious new golden insistence,

offering no believable defense -

we never even touched, we barely spoke.

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Questioning looks from a crowded distance,

your blue eyes shining, my mind in suspense -

our souls entangled from across the room.

**********************************

The theory of my heart lacks resistance

to this crash of universes immense.

We never even touched, we barely spoke.

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But forever bound in coexistence,

we live a truthful life beyond pretense.

Our souls entangled from across the room -

we never even touched, we barely spoke.

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About the Creator

KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    I felt the romance and beauty in this...loved it :) Wonderful work

  • Steven Dean2 years ago

    Very sweet.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Re-read, previously hearted!!!💖💕

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