Quantum Entanglement
A Love Poem by Keila Aartila
Our souls entangled from across the room,
never to be undone by common sense.
We never even touched, we barely spoke.
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Even before I saw, I knew a presence
I could not deny, a force so intense -
our souls entangled from across the room.
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A glorious new golden insistence,
offering no believable defense -
we never even touched, we barely spoke.
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Questioning looks from a crowded distance,
your blue eyes shining, my mind in suspense -
our souls entangled from across the room.
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The theory of my heart lacks resistance
to this crash of universes immense.
We never even touched, we barely spoke.
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But forever bound in coexistence,
we live a truthful life beyond pretense.
Our souls entangled from across the room -
we never even touched, we barely spoke.
About the Creator
KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (4)
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Very nicely done.
I felt the romance and beauty in this...loved it :) Wonderful work
Very sweet.
Re-read, previously hearted!!!💖💕