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Punishment

This is my sixteenth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena. This is a Villanelle

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Punished

This is my sixteenth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.

This is a Villanelle and I hope not too disturbing to read.

The music I have chosen is Magazine's "Rhythm of Cruelty"

πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€

It Is Certain You Are Going To Die

You Have Done Wrong, And You Will Be Punished

You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why

πŸ–€πŸ’€

You Stole, You Murdered, So Cruel Oh My

Killing People’s Pets, Said You Were Famished

It Is Certain You Are Going To Die

πŸ–€πŸ’€

You Destroyed Families, You Never Tried

To Help, Stabbing Them Til They Were Finished

You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Old And Young, Your Cruelty Bled Them Dry

Flaying and Maiming Til All Life Vanished

It Is Certain You Are Going To Die

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Blood Must Flow, Your Sick Needs To Satisfy

Your Evil Self Will Never Diminish

You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Dissolved In Acid There’ll Nought To Scry

Your Body And Past Will Now Be Vanished

It Is Certain You Are Going To Die

You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why

πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€

slam poetry

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Comments (5)

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Dark slam poem superbly expressed!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Grz Colm2 months ago

    Whoa that was intense ! Very different from what I’m use to reading from you but still entertaining! πŸ˜„

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Nicely done!

  • Nothing disturbing for me here, lol! This was a little lighter than your previous dark poems but I still enjoyed reading it!

  • Amazing. I really dig this style and the darkness you tapped.

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