Punishment
This is my sixteenth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena. This is a Villanelle
This is my sixteenth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
This is a Villanelle and I hope not too disturbing to read.
The music I have chosen is Magazine's "Rhythm of Cruelty"
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It Is Certain You Are Going To Die
You Have Done Wrong, And You Will Be Punished
You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why
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You Stole, You Murdered, So Cruel Oh My
Killing Peopleβs Pets, Said You Were Famished
It Is Certain You Are Going To Die
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You Destroyed Families, You Never Tried
To Help, Stabbing Them Til They Were Finished
You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why
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Old And Young, Your Cruelty Bled Them Dry
Flaying and Maiming Til All Life Vanished
It Is Certain You Are Going To Die
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Blood Must Flow, Your Sick Needs To Satisfy
Your Evil Self Will Never Diminish
You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why
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Dissolved In Acid Thereβll Nought To Scry
Your Body And Past Will Now Be Vanished
It Is Certain You Are Going To Die
You Will Burn Now, These Are The Reasons Why
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Comments (5)
Dark slam poem superbly expressed!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Whoa that was intense ! Very different from what Iβm use to reading from you but still entertaining! π
Nicely done!
Nothing disturbing for me here, lol! This was a little lighter than your previous dark poems but I still enjoyed reading it!
Amazing. I really dig this style and the darkness you tapped.