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Promise

a poem

By Vadim KaganPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Promise
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Outside the day is cold,

Stormy,

Will you take over the world

For me?

Will you punish and reward

Fairly,

Use the word and use the sword

Sparely,

Ask for truth, accept the lies

Given

And maintain the lows and highs

Even?

If somehow you keep it all

Churning,

I will catch you when you fall

Burning.

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About the Creator

Vadim Kagan

I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!

Instagram: @wines_and_rhymes

Facebook: www.facebook.com/vadimkagan

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Such a wondeful poem! Love the rhythm of it!

  • Harmony Kentabout a year ago

    Vadim, this is wonderful! 💕🙂

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