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Pretty cool

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By Raine FielderPublished 5 months ago • 1 min read
Top Story - May 2026
Pretty cool
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She seems 'pretty cool'

She doesn't go with the flow

She's got a smart mouth

And her smile has a glow

Well she gets a little tired

And she gets a little mad

I'm sure it has nothing to do with me

Maybe she's just kind of sad

She is very 'pretty, cool'

She breaks the rule of law

She doesn't carry the weight

Of her mother's prideful flaw

A girl with fire and a hard edge

Well maybe she's a little jaded

She's been fed all the wrong ideas

The real her is looking faded

Where are all those high ideals

The big talk of big dreams

All of that has been traded

For two thin golden rings

She couldn't make the bar

Could never pass that exam

So she put the pressure on you

To cover for her scam

But now I get you

you say that you are 'pretty, cool'

marry into mother's love

look like a total fool

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Raine Fielder

Raine has been writing poetry since she was in seventh grade. She has written several poems, song lyrics, short stories and eight books. Writing is her main purpose.

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