The golden dewdrop
mirrors sunlight. Soon to be
evaporated.
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PK Colleran
Longtime teacher, now trying my hand at writing. Poetry, essays and even experimenting with fiction.
Recently enjoyed editing a bilingual poetry collection, now published by Cafh Foundation: Landscape of the Soul by Hipólito Sánchez
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Comments (69)
Wow! Congratulations on well deserved Top story and First place!🎉🎉🎉
Like it!!
Incredible. I see both optimism in smallness and hopelessness in what always happens.
It makes me think about how powerful a life is and can be even though a lifetime is just a small blip in eternity. It's beautiful.
Nice piece ✨💖😉Congratulations🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉✨🎉🎉
Brilliant!!!
Your haiku titled "Precious Moment" by PK Colleran is a beautiful and poignant description of a fleeting moment in nature. The imagery of the golden dewdrop reflecting sunlight before it evaporates is both vivid and evocative, and the use of such simple language and structure in the haiku format is impressive. Congratulations on winning first place in the Time Capsule Haiku Challenge with this stunning piece of writing.Thank you for sharing your work with me and giving me the opportunity to read and appreciate your artistry. It's always a pleasure to encounter talented writers and be inspired by their creations. If you have any other writing you'd like to share, I'd be delighted to read it.
Simply brilliant. 👏🫶🏻
Congratulations 👏
Congrats! I’m so happy for you. This was a well deserved win!
congragulation
Congratulations! Your haiku captured a amazing moment in time. You observation and skill in relating it to words is amazing. Kudo’s.
I love the imagery
Congrats on 1 st , well deserve, Bravo
Best comp winner I've seen. Literally everything I love about the format.
This is an exceptional haiku. Congratulations on your win.
Congratulations! This is gorgeous!
Congratulations on your win! : )
Congrats Dear Patricia.
Congratulations on the win, Patricia!! Well done!! 😍😍
Congratulations on the win!
Congratulations on your first place win! Beautifully serene and elegant 🤗. ❤'d and subscribed!
CONGRATS! Beautiful!
Excellent, congratulations on placing! Beautiful wording.
Congrats, lovely.