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Precious Moment

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By PK ColleranPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2023
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Precious Moment
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The golden dewdrop

mirrors sunlight. Soon to be

evaporated.

nature poetry
136

About the Creator

PK Colleran

Longtime teacher, now trying my hand at writing. Poetry, essays and even experimenting with fiction.

Recently enjoyed editing a bilingual poetry collection, now published by Cafh Foundation: Landscape of the Soul by Hipólito Sánchez

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  • Denise E Lindquist5 days ago

    Wow! Congratulations on well deserved Top story and First place!🎉🎉🎉

  • EMF11 days ago

    Like it!!

  • Mackenzie Davis3 months ago

    Incredible. I see both optimism in smallness and hopelessness in what always happens.

  • J.M. Powell8 months ago

    It makes me think about how powerful a life is and can be even though a lifetime is just a small blip in eternity. It's beautiful.

  • Nice piece ✨💖😉Congratulations🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉✨🎉🎉

  • Linda Rivenbark8 months ago

    Brilliant!!!

  • Mohamed Jakkath8 months ago

    Your haiku titled "Precious Moment" by PK Colleran is a beautiful and poignant description of a fleeting moment in nature. The imagery of the golden dewdrop reflecting sunlight before it evaporates is both vivid and evocative, and the use of such simple language and structure in the haiku format is impressive. Congratulations on winning first place in the Time Capsule Haiku Challenge with this stunning piece of writing.Thank you for sharing your work with me and giving me the opportunity to read and appreciate your artistry. It's always a pleasure to encounter talented writers and be inspired by their creations. If you have any other writing you'd like to share, I'd be delighted to read it.

  • Sarah Wilcox8 months ago

    Simply brilliant. 👏🫶🏻

  • AGB9 months ago

    Congratulations 👏

  • Lamar Wiggins9 months ago

    Congrats! I’m so happy for you. This was a well deserved win!

  • Akii9 months ago

    congragulation

  • J. S. Wade9 months ago

    Congratulations! Your haiku captured a amazing moment in time. You observation and skill in relating it to words is amazing. Kudo’s.

  • Chloe Gilholy9 months ago

    I love the imagery

  • Mariann Carroll9 months ago

    Congrats on 1 st , well deserve, Bravo

  • Dan Gee9 months ago

    Best comp winner I've seen. Literally everything I love about the format.

  • Robbie Cheadle9 months ago

    This is an exceptional haiku. Congratulations on your win.

  • Holly Pheni9 months ago

    Congratulations! This is gorgeous!

  • Gustavo Noguera9 months ago

    Congrats Dear Patricia.

  • Gina C.9 months ago

    Congratulations on the win, Patricia!! Well done!! 😍😍

  • Heather Hubler9 months ago

    Congratulations on the win!

  • Loryne Andawey9 months ago

    Congratulations on your first place win! Beautifully serene and elegant 🤗. ❤'d and subscribed!

  • Susana's World9 months ago

    CONGRATS! Beautiful!

  • Samia Afra9 months ago

    Excellent, congratulations on placing! Beautiful wording.

  • ATHENAH9 months ago

    Congrats, lovely.

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