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Precious Moment

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By PK ColleranPublished about a month ago • 1 min read
First Place in Time Capsule Haiku Challenge
106
Precious Moment
Photo by Gary Yost on Unsplash

The golden dewdrop

mirrors sunlight. Soon to be

evaporated.

nature poetry
106

About the Creator

PK Colleran

Longtime teacher, now trying my hand at writing. Poetry, essays and even experimenting with fiction.

Enjoyed working with a friend as editor of his bilingual poetry, published in 2022 by Cafh Foundation: Landscape of the Soul on Amazon.

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  • AGB3 days ago

    Congratulations 👏

  • Lamar Wiggins4 days ago

    Congrats! I’m so happy for you. This was a well deserved win!

  • Akii4 days ago

    congragulation

  • Prithivi Rajan4 days ago

    HOW MUCH YOU EARN BY THIS POST

  • Scott Wade5 days ago

    Congratulations! Your haiku captured a amazing moment in time. You observation and skill in relating it to words is amazing. Kudo’s.

  • Chloe Gilholy5 days ago

    I love the imagery

  • Mariann Carroll6 days ago

    Congrats on 1 st , well deserve, Bravo

  • Dan Gee6 days ago

    Best comp winner I've seen. Literally everything I love about the format.

  • Robbie Cheadle6 days ago

    This is an exceptional haiku. Congratulations on your win.

  • Holly Pheni6 days ago

    Congratulations! This is gorgeous!

  • Congratulations on your win! : )

  • Gustavo Noguera6 days ago

    Congrats Dear Patricia.

  • Gina C.6 days ago

    Congratulations on the win, Patricia!! Well done!! 😍😍

  • Heather Hubler6 days ago

    Congratulations on the win!

  • Loryne Andawey6 days ago

    Congratulations on your first place win! Beautifully serene and elegant 🤗. ❤'d and subscribed!

  • Susana's World6 days ago

    CONGRATS! Beautiful!

  • Samia Afra7 days ago

    Excellent, congratulations on placing! Beautiful wording.

  • ATHENAH7 days ago

    Congrats, lovely.

  • Denelsia Walker7 days ago

    Congratulations 🎉

  • Deasun T. Smyth7 days ago

    Congratulations.

  • K Spicka7 days ago

    Lovely! Well deserved win.

  • Akii7 days ago

    Gorgeous! Congratulations!! https://vocal.media/education/what-i-do-when-i-fail

  • Dana Crandell7 days ago

    Congratulations!

  • Madison Newton7 days ago

    Congrats!!

  • JBaz7 days ago

    Yep, definitely a winner. Congratulations

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