Always think positively
Never get distracted
always be concentrated
Never think negatively
Don't become selfish
Always be happy
Don't be greedy
Grant your wish
Everyone has their own unique talent
Always keep one thing active, your mind
These things you have to remember
Always you should be silent
Let our victory make sound
If you do these things your brain would weigh a pound
Exercise your mind with puzzles and books,
Challenge yourself to learn and take new looks.
When we take care of ourselves and each other,
Our accomplishments will truly last forever.
Give the mind rest with sleep and breaks,
And feed it well with healthy food and shakes.
So let our victory be more than just a sound,
Let it be a testament to our strength all around.
-Karun
About the Creator
Karun
🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️
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