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Post Ironic Rain Day Observation

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By BrenPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Rain Up the Bush

i feel a drop hit my collar

roll down my neck

under my shirt

cold and uncomfortable

but nothing like the hurt

nothing like an old wound

with the top taken off

ripped open and laid bare

to everything

and nothing

all at once

exposed again

raw nerve pain

feel it all again

put it away for now

don’t pick that thing

that scabby little

rough bit

all made out of edges

nothing beautiful about it

just another healing wound

yeah…i'm just sitting in the rain

i’m getting wet

just a little bit

i’m getting soggy

all melty and cold

lucky i have arrows

on all my boxes

at home

to tell me

which way

is up

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Bren

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    Written by Bren