My empty stomach growling,
I turned on the machine.
Whir!
With my small cup of kernels,
And a patient smile,
I pour them into the machine.
Clatter!
I close the lid,
And cut the butter.
Slice!
Perfectly cut up,
I melt the butter in the microwave.
Buzz!
Now,
I just have to wait.
Pop!
Was that,
Could it be?
Pop!
Yes,
It was!
Pop!
Now white and bigger,
The kernels have blossomed into popcorn,
Piling on top of each other like snow.
Pop!
Pop!
Pop!
Soon the popping stopped,
And so did the buzzing,
Giving me a reason to turn off the machine.
Silence.
I took the butter out of the microwave,
Dumped the popcorn into a bowl,
Before pouring butter onto the hot edible snow.
Sizzle!
I sprinkled a flavorful amount of salt,
Mixed it all together,
And took a bite.
Crunch!
A buttery and salty sensation hit my tongue,
Making me grin from ear to ear,
As I take another bite.
Crunch!
Loved it as a child,
Love it now,
And I always will!
About the Creator
Rebecca Patton
Ever since I discovered Roald Dahl, I wanted to be an author who would delight and move her readers through her stories and characters. I have also written my debut novel, "Of Demons and Deception."
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
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I have been taking some time away from writing. I haven't forgotten about Vocal, the truth is I just have been too busy pursuing other things to write online and honestly, my little family and I just had a really hard month between the flu and a weird eye infection/cold circulating our house. I'm currently sipping some warm peppermint tea because my throat is sore.
By Chloe Rose Violet 🌹5 days ago in BookClub
Comments (2)
Hot edible snow, I loved that! Such a delicious poem!
pop pop pop...I think I can hear it! I love how you incorporated sounds into the poem, and I love popcorn!