The sun was shining,
The air was getting warmer,
It seemed like spring was coming,
Everything was looking up,
But then it got colder,
It began to rain,
Then to snow as well,
And I hit a snag in my life,
It is more annoying than anything,
But it is frustrating nonetheless,
I want to stay inside,
And not go out or do anything,
But I know that is not what I should do,
That is not how to move past this,
So I will go out,
And continue living my life,
Patiently waiting for the day,
When the sun will shine again,
And it will.
About the Creator
Rebecca Patton
Ever since I discovered Roald Dahl, I wanted to be an author who would delight and move her readers through her stories and characters. I have also written my debut novel, "Of Demons and Deception."
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Comments (3)
Yes, the sun would definitely shine again and we shouldn't let a little rain dim the light within us. Loved your poem!
Great job! I'm convinced to get out in the sun to celebrate spring.
Love this! Great job. I love spring time!