I know I shouldn't have
Come here, the Paradise hill
Mistakes from hill (hell)
but came here, no one could save
Who told me to
Not me a voice sweet said
Not who?
but Still, you did
I must walk out before...
Before you go to the heavens
I gasped and pinched myself, Again it did whisper
Soon you will listen to all beethovens
You have no words, You can't disappear
If you do, you will be mine
I will ghost you and reappear
Save the day it's yours
If I will continue
Will I return home without scars
Delicate Dear, Deer Drags Down
from the Lion
"Though you know you are mine
When it comes to survival
I will let you live
Catch you later"
What are you blabbering
Am I daydreaming
Or will I fall for illusions
I don't want to leave, delusions
killing me with confusions
Don't deers dust Diaries
DeVils Discuss discoveries
Darling's Die Destroys Dreams
Explain further words are so sweet
Slithering snakes spicey sights
Soon before its night
Blind Baby broke
Light Lion's Love
Poems hunt me down
My sight searches the king beside
Who stole mine
Now here he comes killing me alive
Your words stretch the skies
Love you Poetic ghost
I fell down the hill before your familiarity says
Meet you in hell
It was all real guilt of deer loving the lion
Love dies when lies reflected
I am the mirror, the man who died fine
Before death lost its meaning
I cried a drop, guilt killed me
Not the hill not the voicing
Not who died for me, He
The one I killed mistaken
Hurts so good, When I feel the same
He died of my domination
I called your name
One last time
My life doesn't rhyme
Tell me it's okay
before I say sorry.
I heard you cry in the air
But only my eyes cried tear
Its okay Welcome home
Moral:
I did Love but too much killed you and me
About the Creator
Karun
🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (6)
Heartbreaking!!! Wonderfully written!!!💕❤️❤️
Oooo, I especially loved those alliterative lines! Such a poignant poem!
Great rhyme scheme!
Nailed it!
Loved this!!
Beautiful poem!