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Mistakes from hill (300 words minimum)

By Karun Published 3 months ago 1 min read

I know I shouldn't have

Come here, the Paradise hill

Mistakes from hill (hell)

but came here, no one could save

Who told me to

Not me a voice sweet said

Not who?

but Still, you did

I must walk out before...

Before you go to the heavens

I gasped and pinched myself, Again it did whisper

Soon you will listen to all beethovens

You have no words, You can't disappear

If you do, you will be mine

I will ghost you and reappear

Save the day it's yours

If I will continue

Will I return home without scars

Delicate Dear, Deer Drags Down

from the Lion

"Though you know you are mine

When it comes to survival

I will let you live

Catch you later"

What are you blabbering

Am I daydreaming

Or will I fall for illusions

I don't want to leave, delusions

killing me with confusions

Don't deers dust Diaries

DeVils Discuss discoveries

Darling's Die Destroys Dreams

Explain further words are so sweet

Slithering snakes spicey sights

Soon before its night

Blind Baby broke

Light Lion's Love

Poems hunt me down

My sight searches the king beside

Who stole mine

Now here he comes killing me alive

Your words stretch the skies

Love you Poetic ghost

I fell down the hill before your familiarity says

Meet you in hell

It was all real guilt of deer loving the lion

Love dies when lies reflected

I am the mirror, the man who died fine

Before death lost its meaning

I cried a drop, guilt killed me

Not the hill not the voicing

Not who died for me, He

The one I killed mistaken

Hurts so good, When I feel the same

He died of my domination

I called your name

One last time

My life doesn't rhyme

Tell me it's okay

before I say sorry.

I heard you cry in the air

But only my eyes cried tear

Its okay Welcome home


I did Love but too much killed you and me

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About the Creator


🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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Comments (6)

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Heartbreaking!!! Wonderfully written!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Oooo, I especially loved those alliterative lines! Such a poignant poem!

  • Cyrus3 months ago

    Great rhyme scheme!

  • Esala Gunathilake3 months ago

    Nailed it!

  • angela hepworth3 months ago

    Loved this!!

  • Alex H Mittelman 3 months ago

    Beautiful poem!

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