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Bar Meets Nose

By Moe RadosevichPublished 7 months ago • Updated 7 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Sinitta Leunen on Unsplash

Title should be Pow!

Subtitle, Bat Meets Nose!

true story, grade school recess playing ball, little pop up that I’m about to catch when classmate swings bat to hit the ball, smacked me right across the nose. Last thing I remembered 😳😳. Thank you for reading,

eyes are on the ball,

watching ball into the glove,

friend tries to hit ball!!

slam poetry

About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Painful!!! Left some love!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Grz Colm7 months ago

    Sheeesh! 😳

  • Ouchhhhhh 🤕

  • Oh nooooo! God that must have been extremely painful! What happened after that? Was your nose broken?

  • Tiffany Gordon 7 months ago

    ouch! sorry...That sounds painful! nicely written!

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Lol. Ouch!

  • Lana V Lynx7 months ago

    Ouch. That must have really hurt.

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