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Petals

Renga

By John CoxPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Petals float in tiny streams,

My thoughts in these moments stilled.

Haiku
15

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John Cox

Family man, grandfather, retired soldier and story teller with an edge.

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  • L.C. Schäfer27 days ago

    You packed so much into just a handful of syllables, well done 😁

  • Kelsey Clareyabout a month ago

    This poem captures so much beauty and a feeling of peace in so few words. Great work!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, this was stunningly beautiful! Loved these lines!

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Beautiful visual. Nature stills our energy to renew it.

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    Sometimes seeing nature at work and in movement is a language all of its own...I think it communicates soul to soul with us in stillness like you said in your poem so eloquently.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Lovely! I agree with Christy, works well alone and as a continuation of the renga

  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    Love the quiet contemplation here John:)

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    love it on its own and in the communal Renga! lovely phrasing!

  • Nice words , beauty in there

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    ooooh...well done sir. Well done on two stirring lines of poetic magic! Great continuation and addition to the other parts!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Beautiful! Thank you so much!

  • Teresa Rentonabout a month ago

    Gorgeous!

  • emaabout a month ago

    lovely!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a month ago

    A great continuation of Hannah's! Loving it!

  • John Cox (Author)about a month ago

    Hannah started it.

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    Lovely :) Did someone else start this one? I was just reading up on the form.

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