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Perfectly Painted

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By PoppyPublished 12 months ago Updated 4 days ago 1 min read
Perfectly Painted
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She is a galaxy

Perfectly painted

On a canvas

Hung on a wall

In his room

She is all the flowers

Planted beautifully

In a garden he waters

Every day

She is waterfalls

And sunsets

And palm trees

On a beach

She is happy smiles

And safe hugs

And kind words

She is goodness

And beauty

And everything

I can never be

She is the girl

He loves and

The girl who

Blocks his view

Of me


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  • Angela Derscha12 months ago

    My heart breaks just reading this, yet I can't help it because it's so beautiful ❤️

  • Oh gosh! The last stanza! I swear I heard my heart break into a million pieces. I've been in the exact scenario of your poem so it deeply resonated with me. Words cannot express how much I love your poem!

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