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Perfectly Me

Senryu

By Cathy holmesPublished about a month ago β€’ 1 min read
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I don't fit your mold.

Flawed, you say. But that's okay.

I'm perfectly me.

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I read a poem this morning in which the author was speaking about how none of us is perfect, though some people expect us to be. I thought, how ridiculous is that? Firstly, I agree. None of us are perfect. Secondly, what if we were? What if we could reach the point where everything we do, and everything we are cannot be improved upon because we'd already reached the peak? How boring would that be? Be yourself. Live. Be happy with who you are, and never stop striving for better.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Heather Hubler24 days ago

    Aww, I LOVED this!!!! Felt like a warm hug from you :)

  • samrin mohammadi27 days ago

    loved it

  • Mariann Carroll29 days ago

    Almost miss Abigail poetry corner. β™₯️As teenagers we thought we have to fit a certain mold to be perfect. As adult you start not to care to be perfect. Being happy is all the perfection you need to be . Love you wise tail poetry Abigail. When are you going to publish your book ?

  • Grz Colm29 days ago

    Heheh cute! Yes… how boring Cathy, too true! β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘

  • L.C. SchΓ€ferabout a month ago

    My cat disagrees. She says she *is* perfect, and if you can't see that it's your fault! I love this.

  • jacki fleetabout a month ago

    Short and sweet and to the point. What is perfect but a perception anyway.

  • Tiffany Gordon about a month ago

    Right on Cathy!!✊🏾✊🏾✊🏾

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a month ago

    If I fits, I sits, even if I don't fits. Ahhh, such a cute picture.

  • Phil Flanneryabout a month ago

    Here, here.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Omggg, tell about it! It's soooo annoying when some people expect us to be perfect! Like hello, are you perfect? No? Then work on that and stop telling others to be perfect! Pot calling the kettle black. So much hypocrisy! Like just let us be happy the way we are! Gosh these kinda people infuriate me so much! Loved your Senryu!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a month ago

    Great poem and message. Love the photo too!

  • John Coxabout a month ago

    Great philosophy, great poem. The cat too big for the basket is just one of the many reasons that cats are adorable. Loved the pic!

  • Be yourself , you are the best at it

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  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a month ago

    Fantastic!! Cheers to being perfectly ourselves!

  • Colleen Millsteed about a month ago

    It sure would be boring my friend. 😊

  • Daphsamabout a month ago

    Oh this speaks volumes!! She is adorable!

  • JBazabout a month ago

    Your picture works perfectly. Is it the correct size …no. But is she happy and content….clearly yes

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Great poem and great picture! I apologize in advance for this, but she looks purrfectly comfortable being herself too!

  • Love the combination of picture & senryu! I made quite a similar comment back in high school on my final paper in utopian literature concerning my belief that utopia &/or heaven require opportunities for continuing growth.

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    Your cat is adorably funny

  • Lindsay Sfaraabout a month ago

    Best way to use a cat photo like this. This is great Cathy!

  • Caroline Janeabout a month ago

    Lovely message and your cat is hilarious! πŸ˜†

  • Joe Pattersonabout a month ago

    Perfectly said.

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Magnificent & loved it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

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