perfect repetition
the day I could live in
sublime perfect days
begin and end the same ways
summer, spring,
hypnotised again
falling into your eyes
of hazel sunrise
.
awakening in satin arms
the softness of brushed cotton charms
winter, fall
equally enthralled
exchanging tender kisses
of granted wishes
.
sublime perfect nights
spent surpassing ecstatic heights
minutes, years
abandoning fears
for the perfect simplicity
of true love’s intimacy
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This was written for Jazzy Goncalves’ ‘The Perfect Challenge’
Write a poem about the perfect day, or morning or evening, or perfect whatever.
Include your senses, such as sight, smell, and taste.
Use words that describe the scene so we can experience the day as you would want to experience it.
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Comments (14)
I really got lost in this - gorgeous!
So mesmerizing, the way your words flow with a grace.
Absolutely hypnotic. This was so enchanting and exquisitely beaufiul-Stunning! 🤍
The simplicity of true love's intimacy. I loved that very much! I'm a very simple person and it's very easy to make me happy. Like just hanging out at home watching tv with them would be perfect to me. Loved your poem!
"falling into your eyes of hazel sunrise".... very lovely poem 💙Anneliese
Wonderful poem!
Well now, Kayleigh...you've done it again, lassie! This is spellbinding and feels so heartfelt, the emotions and that sense of peace and tranquility is palpable! Well done!
This was so lovely, you have such an enchanting way with words that send shivers down my spine and make me feel at peace in my body 🥰
I loved this. You know what I get from this? A sense of peace.
Beautiful & motivational!!! Love this!!!❤️❤️💕
I feel so energized, this is sublime! My favorite line: winter, fall equally enthralled exchanging tender kisses of granted wishes Great work Kayleigh!
Wow! That felt so good! I feel rejuvenated and ready to deal with tomorrow. Thank you for sharing.
This was so beautiful. Every line of this was a masterpiece Kayleigh💛
This is lovely!