I can’t tell where your
Heartbeat ends and mine begins,
Sweet overlapping.
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Colleen Walters
i’m just a girl in Florida who likes to write things, usually inspired by events and people in my life..Always be you, because you are awesome-
When I grow up, I want to be a kid again.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Comments (3)
Awww, this was so sweet! Loved your Haiku!
Yeah, I agree with Anna, this is very romantic. Well done!
This is so romantic!😍