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out of control

Romantic poem.

By Paul StewartPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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out of control
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the touch of your

breath

the back of my

neck

leaves me a little

headspun

out of control

the smile on your

face

the lace on your

skin

leaves me a little

unwound

out of control

*

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Author's Notes: Romantic poem.

Gratitudeperformance poetrylove poemsinspirationalart
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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

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  • Grz Colmabout a month ago

    I only ever say hubba hubba on love poems etc as what else is there really to say.. 😄haha .. I accidentally said hubba Bubba on one of Melissa’s pieces the other day which I suspect might hold another meaning. Actually NO, that is a bubblegum brand in Australia so we are all good! 😅

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    There's something very young about this, that kind of capacity to be swept away.

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is romantic, and very lovely..... unless someone's getting strangled with the lace, then it's a whole other vibe. But then again. Hmmm. I'll shut up now. Bye.

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Whoa, spinning me around Paul!! 🩷

  • Kodahabout a month ago

    Incredible ! 💌

  • Sandra Matosabout a month ago

    This poem is lovely! It is short, but the point is made.

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