Does a leaf love sun?
Open wide to hold its gift,
Why do we not bask?
A/N: I felt inspired to write a haiku as I haven't written one is absolutely ages! I wanted to draw a comparison between the feeling of love - warm, bright, safe - and the sunlight. I hope you enjoyed it!
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Comments (5)
This is utterly gorgeous!
Really beautiful haiku with an eye-opening message! I often wish I could photosynthesize by doing the same. It seems to work, in a way.
I like the style and way you executed this! It really shows how talented you are with the ability to capture a moment in so few words, in a haiku and with only four letter words! Brilliant! I love the parallel you drew between the warmth of the sun and the warmth of love! Very insightful!
This was very thought provoking! I love how you managed to go so deep with just a few words!
Beautiful, I think you did it perfectly.