When I'm with you, my heart feels light, As though the world around me is just right. The way you smile, the way you laugh, Makes my heart skip a beat in half.
I can't help but feel so alive, When I look into your beautiful eyes. Your touch, your kiss, your warm embrace, Fills me with joy, puts a smile on my face.
The way you make me feel, it's hard to explain, It's like a beautiful melody, without any pain. You're the sun that shines on my darkest days, The one who makes me feel alive in so many ways.
So here I am, pouring out my heart, Telling you that you're the missing part. You complete me, you make me whole, My love for you will never grow old.
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Fiza Khan
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Time for #2
This is the second article on my review of the ideas in The Four Agreements. Here's the first article: I knew that I'd move forward with this series, but I put it off as Agreement #2 is a big stumbling block for me. I'd like to say I decided to get out of my own way and thus wrote this, but that isn't the truth. (Since Agreement #1 is to Be Impeccable with Your Word I surely need to own up to that)
By Judey Kalchik 3 days ago in BookClub
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