Here we are,
You and I.
Two of us
Just eye-to-eye.
Ask your name;
Care for mine?
We are not "one" just yet,
Give us time.
Our new date,
Now here we are.
Two of us as one,
In a car.
Eve'n walks,
By the sea,
Hand in hand;
you and me.
Time rolls on.
Date must stop.
I ask you for,
One more romp.
Your eyes gaze
Back at me
You lean in,
Say, "Just you see."
On this nite,
In our time.
We both say,
This last 'bye.
Some day soon,
See you one more time,
Then we'll see,
If our love can fly...
About the Creator
Kent Brindley
Smalltown guy from Southwest Michigan
Lifelong aspiring author here; complete with a few self-published works always looking for more.
https://www.instagram.com/kmoney_gv08/
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Comments (3)
Awww, I want them to meet again and for their love to fly!
Ditto on Judey's comment!!! Loved this!!!❤️❤️💕
OH I hope the lovers reunite!