One Final Season
Challenge #5 You’ve Got Mail
The challenge prompt is to start a story/poem with the last line of an email or letter you recently received.
Ok so this one was a lot harder than I thought, and honestly a lot more fun. I set the goal of picking a single email and sticking with the last line no matter what. I really wanted the challenge (especially after making the affirmative decision to do a poem) but after the fifth, If you have any questions or inquiries please contact us here. I decided to ease up and broaden my spectrum. I landed on a rare and infrequent email from Netflix announcing that they’re shutting down their DVD division. The email ending with the line you see below. This for some silly/weird reason made me sad (don’t laugh at me k). Maybe it sparked some still-fastened sadness I held for the departure of Blockbuster (greatest place on earth). After all, you know what they say: grief never goes away, it only changes. (Not sad for Netflix they’ll be aight). So with that quick spark of disparaging inspiration, it got me thinking about grief in general. And how the line: We truly appreciate you being part of our final season: Taken in a different context can be quite powerful, especially when talking about missing someone or something
Also, RIP Blockbuster, gone but never forgotten
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We truly appreciate you being part of our final season
I begged for solace
You gifted reason
Like a tree that grows and whisks away
Not gone forever just parting ways
Like wandering tales of broken night
I pray for darkness
You gave me light
Empty, broken, fairly but there
Sorrow grows, in the grace we once shared
Maddening disparity replaced by your absence
Clutching the hurt of why this all happened
In solace, I found by touch of loose tether
Just because you're gone
Doesn’t mean I won’t love you forever
This isn’t cruelty, this isn’t treason
Blessed in gratitude for giving me.
One last season
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Comments (7)
Saying goodbye to something / someone we love is always difficult. Very well done!
This poem is a gem! And I feel wistful about Blockbuster too 😔
I miss Blockbuster 😌. It's a shame they didn't jump onboard when they had the chance. Nice entry, James. I felt it.
Whoaaa, I didn't expect it to get so deep and emotional! This was awesomeeee!
James, brilliant and beautiful love and heartbreak all rolled into one!!! Loved this!!!
That was fly! Great job James!
This is so darn beautiful man, you gonna make me cry