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On Top Of The World

When You Said, You Loved Me.

By Carol TownendPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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On Top Of The World
Photo by Nghia Le on Unsplash

The brilliant golden sun danced through the clouds,

My heart fluttered like a million delicate butterflies

fluttering inside of me;

My feet floated as the clouds danced and lifted me into

your embrace;

My lips coated with sweet, sugar candy every time we kissed.

You took my hand and enclosed it in the warm, quilted softness

of your own;

The beautiful golden sun-baked cotton of your touch warmed my hands,

Like being loved in cotton clouds;

You danced with me in the brilliance of sun-set gold on white snow;

And when you said,

"I love you,"

We danced all night,

On top of the world.

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About the Creator

Carol Townend

Fiction, Horror, Sex, Love, Mental Health, Children's fiction and more. You'll find many stories in my profile. I don't believe in sticking with one Niche! I write, but I also read a lot too.

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  • D. A. Ratliff2 months ago

    To dance on top of the world for love. Beautiful!

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