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On One Knee

Love poetry

By SteelPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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On One Knee
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My heart is fluttering as I look in the clear blue sky

I think of her beautiful smile like a sweet apple pie

It’s my time to make a move and be happy about life

You think she will say yes, if I ask her to be my wife

Am I too old to have a second chance on this love

I’m nervous My knees are shaking hands are sweaty

it’s time to make the move, she is so young, so beautiful

She asked, why am I acting so funny? With a curious laugh

I’m not sure what to say, but I reach into my pocket

I go down to one knee. This is not the time to be shy.

If I want her for life I must say the words will you marry me?

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Steel

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran5 months ago

    Awww, this was so sweet and romantic! Loved your wonderful poem!

  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    This is so beautiful. Well done.

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