Okay, But What if the Earth Was Flat?
Spheres adhere to certain guidelines,
but I could not abide within mine own.
The perfect vision never lasts.
*
Action, time, the hard decisions
blur the picture, head-on collision
wrecks, rebuilds, it happens both slow and fast.
*
I, I'm sitting at the edge of the world.
But I can't see it through the eyes of the girl
who hangs her feet above the stars
as they are born,
for when they die, I just can't help but look away.
*
Spheroid, steroids, bull injections
couldn't make it into what the
other 3-D shapes think it should be.
*
But I think form is work in progress.
I also think that I should talk less.
Maybe make a change, see what you see.
*
See, I, I'm sitting at the edge of the world.
And I want to see it through the eyes of the girl
who hangs her feet above the stars
as they are born,
and when they die, I'll force myself to watch, to stay.
*
At her sides, the tide is coming in.
It guides her to the place where life begins
and goes to end.
*
She, she's living at the edge of the Earth.
And she, she wonders what it's like to feel the worth
of words the world produces,
whether it's loving rhymes or lame excuses.
What's the meaning of a promise
if it can't light up the darkness?
*
Well, I, I'm sitting at the edge of the world
right next to you.
About the Creator
Jacob Sherman
The desire to read, and perhaps to write, should be cultivated and nurtured with care throughout every stage of life. For my part I will inject what strangeness and truth that I can into our written history. Expect no constants but honesty.
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