Is it all good
until I asked
Do stars still twinkle in your night,
Or do they fade, dim out of sight?
Do dreams still dance in your sleep,
Or are they shadows, silent and draggy deep?
is the sky so grey?
You okay???
Does morning greet you with a smile...
else does the day seem like a long mile?
Is your heart light, like a bird in the sky,
or burdened by clouds, as time passes near by?
When I am conserned for you
In your silent moments, when no words you say,
I wonder, dear friend, are you truly okay?
I'm happy until you don't act new
I'm there for you, dear
I can lend my shoulders to cry
Armour your fears
Our friendship lives by
the peaceful shores
Eyes that sparkle, yet sometimes stray,
From the truth inside, "Are you okay"?
Is it all good today?
If not I guarentee it another way
though your silence pierces my heart
I will keep still asking you about
come what may,
I care for you, truly—are you okay?
About the Creator
Karun
🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️
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Comments (2)
I love the selfless attitude and meaning behind your poem. Very good work!
Your poem, "Okay," beautifully reflects the layers of feelings beneath a seemingly simple word. It skillfully delves into the nuances of acceptance, resilience, and the human experience. Your ability to evoke such depth in a concise and poignant manner is truly commendable.