Ode to Hephaestus
Honeysuckle
Honeysuckle wraps the rafters like yellow hands
Gripping at the wet, dripping posts
And a bruised flower pops up from the floor
Petals pricked apart by the planks
So pitifully pretty they blur the eye with tears
And ivy climbs the walls around me
Surrounding me with such holy air that it takes
My breath and runs down the halls with it
Where the sun plays against the dust floating
Like Faye and one can not help but to pray
This place is of God and the ants dance
Upon the kitchen table and sing hymns
Of dirt cooking on the stove where
There once was a pie; now this place grows
With life teeming and tearing the seams apart
Lightning blistering the sky and the ceiling
Splits and heaven fills these halls
And the Faye and ants and honeysuckles all share In the same romance of living and dying
The same and one can not help but to pray
For the walls bewailing and the sighs
Of the windows boarded up, where light
Use to move through them like warm blood
Beneath their skin, now cold and dim
For the paint cracked and crumbling with
Old age, gray hairs hanging around the ears,
Red ears that sting when the night descends
Upon the halls of this hallowed place
For the dancing of the ants and the floating
Of the Faye, one can not help but to pray
About the Creator
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Comments (9)
I came for the image and got lost in your words and the beautiful decay.
"It is only with the heart one can see rightly. What is essential is invisible to the eye." This has a feeling of a grown up little prince conversing about his rose with Rumi. Talking about that radiant "something," which gives everything its beauty :)
Love the alliteration and allusion that are used throughout the poem. Well done!
Beautifully written...I Love the images it creates!! And the 'sad', which is only another vein of beauty!! And my favorite!
Hephaestus mastered the craft of metallurgy. He then made a golden throne which he sent to his mother Hera as a gift.
there is definitely a charm and as you put it a romance to this humble abode where even though it has fallen to disrepair and was once for people is now for nature. beautiful
Gorgeous
A wonderful creation
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