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Ode to a Gold Star Pin

A dime-size pin given to families who've lost loved ones in war holds a lifetime of sorrow

By Vivian R McInernyPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Ode to a Gold Star Pin
Photo by Hikarinoshita Hikari on Unsplash

On her shoulder, a gold and purple pin,

unimpressive in its size.

A wreath of laurel holds within

a small gold star, unnoticed by most eyes

The decorated generals praise skills of killers and machines designed for death

And in their next breath, declare peace and prosperity for their once mortal enemy.

And formally present to her, a pin, while she, broken wife and widow, washes hands with the madness of Ms. Macbeth

To scrub for all eternity at a sadness for which there is no remedy.

Only a prickled pin, she wears now not with pride,

or to wallow in past sorrow.

But to carry love for one who died

into their unshared tomorrows.

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About the Creator

Vivian R McInerny

A former daily newspaper journalist, now an independent writer of essays & fiction published in several lit anthologies. The Whole Hole Story children's book was published by Versify Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2021. More are forthcoming.

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    Written by Vivian R McInerny